tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post2083388568461334085..comments2023-05-15T01:30:00.671-07:00Comments on Liz Page: Just Keep Writing: Teaser Tuesday!LizPagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-91549199325974194912009-12-24T07:48:02.636-08:002009-12-24T07:48:02.636-08:00Your writing is so beautiful <3Your writing is so beautiful <3Karla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-81038729877196812262009-12-23T09:21:46.871-08:002009-12-23T09:21:46.871-08:00Gahhh your writing is so beautiful. I especially l...Gahhh your writing is so beautiful. I especially loved this line: "Someone once told me that there were more people on earth now than ever before but I was only half listening and I might be remembering it wrong." So great.Veronica Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04728002051255414818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-79033268861203862652009-12-23T07:38:50.233-08:002009-12-23T07:38:50.233-08:00I mean it when I say this is truly amazing. I alwa...I mean it when I say this is truly amazing. I always look forward to reading your Tuesday snippets, probably because I feel very akin to your writing style. Anyway, keep it up! If you haven't found an agent for this yet, it shouldn't be too hard to do so.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-26362632042776724492009-12-23T03:48:46.277-08:002009-12-23T03:48:46.277-08:00Your writing is beautiful. I loved this.Your writing is beautiful. I loved this.Speech Delay Mammahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05601787057516846172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-81916448599548113282009-12-22T19:09:40.062-08:002009-12-22T19:09:40.062-08:00You have great interior dialogue and flow in every...You have great interior dialogue and flow in everything I've read by you, Liz. Amazing characters, too :)Veehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03844706436726113433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-87964870556700757062009-12-22T17:32:47.732-08:002009-12-22T17:32:47.732-08:00I really want her to hold his hand and I know noth...I really want her to hold his hand and I know nothing that is going on. I like your MC's thoughts.J.S. Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231458559331295121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-8988591113875059012009-12-22T16:25:44.799-08:002009-12-22T16:25:44.799-08:00Love the inner dialogue, and your MC's voice!
...Love the inner dialogue, and your MC's voice!<br /><br />Great teaser :Din which a girl readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563423294648988362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-2339253102852276022009-12-22T14:20:42.210-08:002009-12-22T14:20:42.210-08:00Love the yellow line like a tightrope. Curious ab...Love the yellow line like a tightrope. Curious about the baby taking her place... I would read on.Jill Wheelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15059527254551768150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-76372631862819320322009-12-22T10:27:06.419-08:002009-12-22T10:27:06.419-08:00"Or maybe we’re the ghosts, maybe we’re all a..."Or maybe we’re the ghosts, maybe we’re all already gone" --there's something so thought-provoking about this line!<br />With all your teasers, I have to admit, I'm falling in love with Lindsay :)Bidishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382938442171208326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-14768337954083162382009-12-22T10:25:49.998-08:002009-12-22T10:25:49.998-08:00You've got me curious too - time isn't on ...You've got me curious too - time isn't on our side, I'll be leaving an empty space. Something bad is going to happen, isn't?Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-76282353381243937782009-12-22T10:23:16.919-08:002009-12-22T10:23:16.919-08:00I agree, the inner dialog is really nice. But also...I agree, the inner dialog is really nice. But also really nice character descriptions. I'm interested in the relationships.Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01846922950214539315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-51085657640208845422009-12-22T08:44:34.608-08:002009-12-22T08:44:34.608-08:00"I’ll be leaving an empty space"--
Awww,..."I’ll be leaving an empty space"--<br />Awww, that is so sad :(<br /><br />I love the inner dialogue in this scene, and how she admits to be prideful.Amnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15286300957307296262noreply@blogger.com