tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post6286340693284423614..comments2023-05-15T01:30:00.671-07:00Comments on Liz Page: Just Keep Writing: Tease!LizPagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-19628018056997587382010-04-09T08:46:11.316-07:002010-04-09T08:46:11.316-07:00Seriously awesome snip. I love your writing SO muc...Seriously awesome snip. I love your writing SO much!Karla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-14768528503627377852010-04-06T21:51:54.625-07:002010-04-06T21:51:54.625-07:00Wow, awesome snip! Great narrator--you pull off m...Wow, awesome snip! Great narrator--you pull off male MC so well--and love the descriptions! Plus, I know so many people whose first thought is of their seats getting bloody--how sad is that? :)Debra Drizahttp://www.houndrat.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-61759391747838281252010-04-06T14:25:30.746-07:002010-04-06T14:25:30.746-07:00So good!! I love male POV. Great descriptions.So good!! I love male POV. Great descriptions.Jamie Blairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15899384749829457808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-78166181406711637002010-04-06T11:39:05.442-07:002010-04-06T11:39:05.442-07:00Oh Liz this is great! I really like the dialogue. ...Oh Liz this is great! I really like the dialogue. And your descriptions are always amazing. I particularly liked this line: I wonder if she knows I'm lying, that the anger is still an insistent burn tearing new paths through my veins, setting my nerves on edge and a fire in my chest.<br /><br />wow!Writing Writerly thingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17184023954656057661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-43040433267218780012010-04-06T11:24:44.243-07:002010-04-06T11:24:44.243-07:00Beautiful descriptions. Your last paragraph, espec...Beautiful descriptions. Your last paragraph, especially, is amazing!Kaitlin Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01218406803223729204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-82806149359717604662010-04-06T07:48:59.868-07:002010-04-06T07:48:59.868-07:00that last paragraph is just perfect. love it!that last paragraph is just perfect. love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-5026754681381057122010-04-06T06:33:06.853-07:002010-04-06T06:33:06.853-07:00I love that you wrote from a male POV. I think you...I love that you wrote from a male POV. I think you did a wonderful job with emotions (as always). They're not easy to write, but you pulled it off. <3Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-40842579055861028262010-04-06T05:57:52.551-07:002010-04-06T05:57:52.551-07:00your writing evokes a moving sad emotion within me...your writing evokes a moving sad emotion within me. I fear for you MC. He's on a really destructive path. Let's hope he gets himself together before it's too lateGlen Akinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-14730067697317541132010-04-06T05:08:00.803-07:002010-04-06T05:08:00.803-07:00great descriptions!great descriptions!Véro Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437660016137470145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16915458411949934.post-10663777490300229002010-04-06T00:25:29.606-07:002010-04-06T00:25:29.606-07:00You have some great images going on, especially in...You have some great images going on, especially in that last paragraph. I loved "she's the only person I want to bleed my emotions out for." Great teaser!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com