This is my brandy new, barely written, may still have grammatical/spelling mistakes. The only reason I'm showing all of you is because I love you so much :)
This isn't even titled, but in general, it's about a boy who loses his girlfriend, Anna, and his best friend, Ben, in a car crash. This isn't the very beginning, but it is from the first chapter. Enjoy!
*thanks guys!*
About Me
- LizPage
- I'm a young adult writer with a penchant for reading, writing and drinking insane amounts of coffee. I'm an insomniac with a habit of late night blogging/reading/marathoning Criminal Minds. I'd love to hear from you so don't hesitate to drop a line!
9 comments:
OMG I'm speechless. I want to read the rest of the story. If you need a storyline beta let me know!
The pain is captivating; letting you move alongside the MC and see, hear, feel what he is feeling, without being overwhelming nor sounding like a Drive Safe commercial. Amazing and power piece of writing Liz!
I'm all teary eyed now.
LYN
Beautiful and so sad!
Oh, Liz, this is fantastic!
I don't know what else to say..it just made me -I don't know - reflect..
You know I love this! Gimme more and soon!!!!!!
Wow, I love it! Such beautiful words. It's very heart-wrenching. Great job. The emotions here are so real.
Sad and lovely!
Really like the picture you chose to go with it, too.
YOUR MC pulled at me, and I couldn't help wanted to smother your MC with my hugs.
such a beautiful teaser.
I really don't need to say much. Everyone's said it already. It's awesome, and way too good to be a first draft lol :Dc
You make being sad sound so fabulous, Liz. This is amazing. Much love.
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