Monday, July 12, 2010

Teaser from Hell

So, I'm 25000/50000 of my Heaven/Hell MS and 20000/60000 of my rewrite. All in one week. Jeesh. If only my office is so dead every week so I can just keep pushing at this pace! Tease from our little demon now.

8 comments:

Girlinbetween said...

bahahahaha!

The dialogue! The voice! so brilliant

Ellen said...

Beezlebub Lane made me giggle :) I love this exchange too:
“Caleb!” I say, shrill and panicked.[...]
“Dani!” he responds, mocking and strangely fond.

Also made me laugh ;)

Karla Nellenbach said...

Dude! Blogger keeps eating my comments...so if you end up with like six from me you know why ;)

anyway...demon post office...heheh...i was snickering just as much this time as i was the first time i read this part...more please. now biotch...er please?

Angie said...

This really made me laugh - I love it that it's her shoes that convinces her to do it. So creative!

Lia Victoria said...

You've got a spectacular voice! I was giggling all the way through this:D

juli said...

Hahahahaha this is great!! Loved "Beezlebub Lane." And, of course, the last line. :D

Karla Calalang said...

Wow, the voice is SO amazing. the dialogue is fantastic too. AHH your writing is just perfect. I love it! :D

Bri said...

This is so funny! The dialogue is just incredible. Awesome tease :D