Monday, July 5, 2010

Tuesday Trip To Hell

While I'm revising 365, which is majorly sad, I decided to go for something majorly fun/borderline cracktastic. Dani dies, embarrassingly, and goes to Heaven, which is great and everything, but pretty boring. So, she jumps on a job opportunity down south, without asking quite how far down. Hijinks ensue.

  

7 comments:

CJ Paris said...

I love it! Caleb, the witty kickass demon lawyer. heh. And Dani is pretty cool too.

Definitely an interesting idea.

Lia Victoria said...

He's a spunky doom-bringer, isn't he? Wonderful dialogue, and the description of his laughing behind his fist - rather than his hand - is a lovely touch :]

Sage said...

I like that the demon is the one who gets to be the afterlife lawyer.

I love different versions of afterlife/heaven/hell. This sounds interesting

Horserider said...

I love this =D I also love the idea that hell has different floors. I'm curious about how Caleb is going to fit into this.

Phoebe said...

I didn't know you did paranormal stuff! I love this.

Karla Calalang said...

The dialogue is fanastic. This paranormal idea seems really cool! :D

Girlinbetween said...

Dialogue is BRILLIANT.

And I WANT Caleb.

That is all.