Monday, April 12, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Happy Tuesday guys! This is from my new, untitled WIP. SINK is done now, but there is one thing I could use - Betas! I know it's April, which is a crazy month for anyone in school, but if you're interested, shoot me an email at epage126[at]gmail[dot]com - I'll beta in return!


snip!

6 comments:

Marilyn Almodovar said...

Oh Liz, I love this!!! First the names Marnie and Chuck, it reminds me of old movie stars and it fits your characters so well. I love the whole dynamics in the group of friends. I'm looking forward to the whole thing with Marnie and the friends. Will she destabilize the group? My money is on that LOL.


I'm available for betaing, just email me. :D

Loved this bit: I slammed my own locker shut, storming off. It felt pretty epic, until I realized that I had come to school with Noah and he'd be bringing Grace home, so all that I could do was go wait on his hood and hope to think of a good argument.

Karla Nellenbach said...

nice snip! i like the little changes you made! ;)

Amanda said...

Really good teaser! Your characters are fun and easy to relate to. And the scene where they are all doing each others homework actually felt like high school. Good joB!

Glen Akin said...

I love the dialogue interplay between your characters :) And this feels so much like high school

Karla Calalang said...

Reminds me so much of HS! I love it! Awesome snip :)

The Twinkies said...

Man, love this, love you, the voice seriously gives me the chills, it's that good.