Monday, April 5, 2010

Tease!

Is it Tuesday already? All I know is that it's April, aka Hell Month for all you college students. Wow. Longest teaser ever? Sorry guys. It's probably the last from SINK though because it's out on agent submissions and I'll be working on my SNI and teasing from that.


snip!

10 comments:

corrinejackson said...

You have some great images going on, especially in that last paragraph. I loved "she's the only person I want to bleed my emotions out for." Great teaser!

V.M.Pettingill said...

great descriptions!

Glen Akin said...

your writing evokes a moving sad emotion within me. I fear for you MC. He's on a really destructive path. Let's hope he gets himself together before it's too late

Becca said...

I love that you wrote from a male POV. I think you did a wonderful job with emotions (as always). They're not easy to write, but you pulled it off. <3

Karla Nellenbach said...

that last paragraph is just perfect. love it!

Kaitlin Ward said...

Beautiful descriptions. Your last paragraph, especially, is amazing!

Marilyn Almodovar said...

Oh Liz this is great! I really like the dialogue. And your descriptions are always amazing. I particularly liked this line: I wonder if she knows I'm lying, that the anger is still an insistent burn tearing new paths through my veins, setting my nerves on edge and a fire in my chest.

wow!

Jamie B said...

So good!! I love male POV. Great descriptions.

Debra Driza said...

Wow, awesome snip! Great narrator--you pull off male MC so well--and love the descriptions! Plus, I know so many people whose first thought is of their seats getting bloody--how sad is that? :)

Karla Calalang said...

Seriously awesome snip. I love your writing SO much!