Monday, April 5, 2010
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About Me
- LizPage
- I'm a young adult writer with a penchant for reading, writing and drinking insane amounts of coffee. I'm an insomniac with a habit of late night blogging/reading/marathoning Criminal Minds. I'd love to hear from you so don't hesitate to drop a line!
10 comments:
You have some great images going on, especially in that last paragraph. I loved "she's the only person I want to bleed my emotions out for." Great teaser!
great descriptions!
your writing evokes a moving sad emotion within me. I fear for you MC. He's on a really destructive path. Let's hope he gets himself together before it's too late
I love that you wrote from a male POV. I think you did a wonderful job with emotions (as always). They're not easy to write, but you pulled it off. <3
that last paragraph is just perfect. love it!
Beautiful descriptions. Your last paragraph, especially, is amazing!
Oh Liz this is great! I really like the dialogue. And your descriptions are always amazing. I particularly liked this line: I wonder if she knows I'm lying, that the anger is still an insistent burn tearing new paths through my veins, setting my nerves on edge and a fire in my chest.
wow!
So good!! I love male POV. Great descriptions.
Wow, awesome snip! Great narrator--you pull off male MC so well--and love the descriptions! Plus, I know so many people whose first thought is of their seats getting bloody--how sad is that? :)
Seriously awesome snip. I love your writing SO much!
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