I love to tease, especially as I watch criminal minds and hoarders, reassuring myself that the insane psych degree is worth it. As for that history degree I'll never use...nothing will ever make that seem more sane.
This is from my WIP Veering Off The Straight and Narrow. This one's from Nate's POV after he's unwittingly ditched the boyfriend to attend a party with his jock friends.
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"There’s a list somewhere that someone’s keeping, or maybe it writes itself, of stupid shit I shouldn’t have done."
LOVE this line!
Ok, so Sarah said it before me. :(
There’s a list somewhere that someone’s keeping, or maybe it writes itself, of stupid shit I shouldn’t have done. It’s entitled, Things Nate Didn’t Mean To Do, Oops, and Casey has been related to almost every single entry
I think that's a very poignant passage, and I so want to know what Casey's going to do and how he's going to react when they talk the next morning. Good job!
Lynkay
beautifully written and I'm curious to the story behind it all.
haha! now the list thing that i was harping on makes sense! you sneaky! you added something behind my back! I really like the passage! it's great! i cant wait to read more...hint hint :)
Wow, this is fantastic, Liz! It's poignant, yet, the male PoV's really convincing *wonders if Liz will post a synop*
I love your writing :D
This has a strong voice, and I love the dialog you throw in here. Male POV is difficult to nail, but I think you are def. on the right track! :D
Nate seems like a great character! Your male POV is great! :)
Amazing voice, I feel absolutely connected to Nate.
Wow this really makes me want to know all about this book. Great job!
The voice comes of great and there are some beautiful lines in this snippet! Great teaser, and as always
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wonderfully written! Love Teaser Tuesdays in the blogging world!
Oh I also love Criminal Minds & Hoarders! LOL...
Excellent blog, glad I came and visited! Look forward to future posts!
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