Monday, January 25, 2010

Teaser!

  I love to tease, especially as I watch criminal minds and hoarders, reassuring myself that the insane psych degree is worth it. As for that history degree I'll never use...nothing will ever make that seem more sane.
 This is from my WIP Veering Off The Straight and Narrow. This one's from Nate's POV after he's unwittingly ditched the boyfriend to attend a party with his jock friends.

 *thanks everyone!*

11 comments:

Sarah said...

"There’s a list somewhere that someone’s keeping, or maybe it writes itself, of stupid shit I shouldn’t have done."


LOVE this line!

Anonymous said...

Ok, so Sarah said it before me. :(

There’s a list somewhere that someone’s keeping, or maybe it writes itself, of stupid shit I shouldn’t have done. It’s entitled, Things Nate Didn’t Mean To Do, Oops, and Casey has been related to almost every single entry


I think that's a very poignant passage, and I so want to know what Casey's going to do and how he's going to react when they talk the next morning. Good job!


Lynkay

V.M.Pettingill said...

beautifully written and I'm curious to the story behind it all.

Karla Nellenbach said...

haha! now the list thing that i was harping on makes sense! you sneaky! you added something behind my back! I really like the passage! it's great! i cant wait to read more...hint hint :)

Bee said...

Wow, this is fantastic, Liz! It's poignant, yet, the male PoV's really convincing *wonders if Liz will post a synop*

I love your writing :D

Annie McElfresh said...

This has a strong voice, and I love the dialog you throw in here. Male POV is difficult to nail, but I think you are def. on the right track! :D

Karla Calalang said...

Nate seems like a great character! Your male POV is great! :)

Little Miss Allicatt said...

Amazing voice, I feel absolutely connected to Nate.

bclement412 said...

Wow this really makes me want to know all about this book. Great job!

Amna said...

The voice comes of great and there are some beautiful lines in this snippet! Great teaser, and as always

MOOAAARRR PLEEAASEE

Jen said...

wonderfully written! Love Teaser Tuesdays in the blogging world!

Oh I also love Criminal Minds & Hoarders! LOL...

Excellent blog, glad I came and visited! Look forward to future posts!