Monday, January 4, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

Happy 2010 everyone! I hope you all had a fantastic holiday. Now, back to the real world. Little tease from 365 after Lindsay and Sam have fought. Also, check out my kickass beta's blog for her teaser.

*snip* you guys kick ass!

20 comments:

Kathy Bradey said...

Great tease! I love your MC's internal dialogue, and the flow of your words.
And Suriel is a cool name!

J.S. Wood said...

I love the description of the "errant water" and really want to know what's going on!

houndrat said...

And again I say--this is so going to be a heartbreaker! You have some awesome descriptive prose. Also love the bittersweet tone of your MC's IM. Lovely.

VĂ©ro said...

Beautiful. Your prose is almost poetic and your story is heartbreaking. I'm so curious about some of the things said.

Lost Crayons said...

This made me so sad, but in a good way. Death sucks.

Jamie B said...

I agree with the others - heartbreaking. This is wonderful and bitter and wonderful and...it will make me cry for sure!

Karla Nellenbach said...

We both know how much I loved this story, and reading the snippets just brings it all back! I especially love the last line. 'The floor is lava.' Sums up her wanting to stay there forever. Keep it up girly!

Becca said...

Dude, this makes me sad. The beginning was very bittersweet.

Bee said...

This is so poignant and beautiful.
How come every hot guy these days is called Riley? :P
I wanna know how it ends yet it makes me so sad to think about it *sigh*

Karla Calalang said...

Awww... so sad but beautiful. Your prose is so amazing. I'm jealous!

V said...

Every week your writing just hits me straight in the gut. This time in particular it was "When will the hard ground finally thaw out and sweep gracefully into spring? Will I make it that long?" Beautiful.

parametric said...

Aww! That's so sad.

Amna said...

Absolutely heartbreaking but I love her internal dialogue.

CupofDice said...

I love the chemistry between those two. Great job!

Paranormalchick said...

*sigh* I can feel the chemistry here. I loved it, but it made me sad at the same time. Great job. :)

Angie said...

This makes me sigh with all the beautiful imagery and the love between the two, then I start to feel so sad. Great job evoking the reader's emotions. :)

Sumayyah said...

I love the chemistry between the two. SO romantic -sighs- Also - I love the last line :)

aulsh said...

I just found your blog on AW, hello!

Love your writing, this scene feels very real and intimate.

Deniz Kuypers said...

Beautiful and sad as usual. What I like about this is that the sadness is very subtle, like the line where she says she could get used to domestic sounds. Because as a reader, you know she won't get that chance. Good job!

Kaitlin Ward said...

So lovely and sad. Great teaser!