Monday, February 22, 2010

T-t-teaseee

This is my brandy new, barely written, may still have grammatical/spelling mistakes. The only reason I'm showing all of you is because I love you so much :)
This isn't even titled, but in general, it's about a boy who loses his girlfriend, Anna, and his best friend, Ben, in a car crash. This isn't the very beginning, but it is from the first chapter. Enjoy!
*thanks guys!*

9 comments:

lynkay said...

OMG I'm speechless. I want to read the rest of the story. If you need a storyline beta let me know!

The pain is captivating; letting you move alongside the MC and see, hear, feel what he is feeling, without being overwhelming nor sounding like a Drive Safe commercial. Amazing and power piece of writing Liz!

I'm all teary eyed now.

LYN

V.M.Pettingill said...

Beautiful and so sad!

Bee said...

Oh, Liz, this is fantastic!
I don't know what else to say..it just made me -I don't know - reflect..

Karla Nellenbach said...

You know I love this! Gimme more and soon!!!!!!

Karla Calalang said...

Wow, I love it! Such beautiful words. It's very heart-wrenching. Great job. The emotions here are so real.

Kaitlin Ward said...

Sad and lovely!
Really like the picture you chose to go with it, too.

Amna said...

YOUR MC pulled at me, and I couldn't help wanted to smother your MC with my hugs.

such a beautiful teaser.

Glen Akin said...

I really don't need to say much. Everyone's said it already. It's awesome, and way too good to be a first draft lol :Dc

Mortem Twins said...

You make being sad sound so fabulous, Liz. This is amazing. Much love.