Wow, very well written. I can feel the emotion in this. Well done!
I seriously love this. You've created some amazing, original phrases that are just brilliant. LOVE it.
Love this :D
Your discriptions are so original! Nicely done! :D PS. I heart romance
Beautiful and sad.
That last paragraph. Wow. Amazing. I had tears in my eyes. Such beautiful prose.
Wow, this is so romantic. It drew me right in to the characters.
beautiful! It seems so bittersweet!
Ooooh. I really liked the last paragraph. Good teaser!
Fantastic! I agree--great new descriptions and the last paragraph was lovely! It made me wish I could write literary, lol!Nicely done!
Beautiful moment! Your style is very unique, which just made me like it all the more. Very nice!
This was so beautiful and lovely. Loved it! Your prose is so perfect!
SUCH BEAUTIFUL PROSE!!
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