Monday, November 30, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

It's that time again. Or almost that time. Here's my tease!

      snip! thanks for the comments, you're all incredible!

13 comments:

Serena and Selena said...

Wow, very well written. I can feel the emotion in this. Well done!

corrinejackson said...

I seriously love this. You've created some amazing, original phrases that are just brilliant. LOVE it.

inkspatters said...

Love this :D

Paranormalchick said...

Your discriptions are so original! Nicely done! :D

PS. I heart romance

Kaitlin Ward said...

Beautiful and sad.

Laura McMeeking said...

That last paragraph. Wow. Amazing. I had tears in my eyes. Such beautiful prose.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Wow, this is so romantic. It drew me right in to the characters.

Véro said...

beautiful! It seems so bittersweet!

Amanda said...

Ooooh. I really liked the last paragraph. Good teaser!

houndrat said...

Fantastic! I agree--great new descriptions and the last paragraph was lovely! It made me wish I could write literary, lol!

Nicely done!

Leah Michelle said...

Beautiful moment! Your style is very unique, which just made me like it all the more. Very nice!

Karla said...

This was so beautiful and lovely. Loved it! Your prose is so perfect!

Amna said...

SUCH BEAUTIFUL PROSE!!