Monday, November 30, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

It's that time again. Or almost that time. Here's my tease!

      snip! thanks for the comments, you're all incredible!

13 comments:

Unknown said...

Wow, very well written. I can feel the emotion in this. Well done!

Anonymous said...

I seriously love this. You've created some amazing, original phrases that are just brilliant. LOVE it.

Vee said...

Love this :D

Annie McElfresh said...

Your discriptions are so original! Nicely done! :D

PS. I heart romance

Kaitlin Ward said...

Beautiful and sad.

Laura McMeeking said...

That last paragraph. Wow. Amazing. I had tears in my eyes. Such beautiful prose.

Laurie said...

Wow, this is so romantic. It drew me right in to the characters.

Véro L said...

beautiful! It seems so bittersweet!

Amanda said...

Ooooh. I really liked the last paragraph. Good teaser!

houndrat said...

Fantastic! I agree--great new descriptions and the last paragraph was lovely! It made me wish I could write literary, lol!

Nicely done!

Leah said...

Beautiful moment! Your style is very unique, which just made me like it all the more. Very nice!

Karla Calalang said...

This was so beautiful and lovely. Loved it! Your prose is so perfect!

Amna said...

SUCH BEAUTIFUL PROSE!!