Monday, May 3, 2010

Tease-tease-tease

I'm teasing from my band geeks this week, who have been horribly neglected in favor - aka obligation to - stats. But that's all over now people! Come Thursday, I take my last final of my junior year and spend all my time writing. Warning - these are not the five hundred words you're looking for. I suck.


11 comments:

Caitlin said...

Ooh, this sounds good to me! Harmony sounds like my best friend :P

inkspatters said...

I love your characters and as always, the smoothness of your prose is totally awesome and amazing :)

Karla Nellenbach said...

Yay for band geeks! :) I'm going to read your chap this morning and get it back to you! Have fun on your tests

Caitlin R. O'Connell said...

A book about band geeks? Awesome! These characters sound hilarious and awesome, I love it!

Ellen said...

I already love Harmony, she sounds insane in a highly awesome way :)

Lia Victoria said...

I love how vividly I can imagine your characters, just through great dialogue!

Cheyanne Young said...

I love love love this! Especially this line: Eyes straight ahead, legs burning, I focused only on the back of Harmony's head instead of our impending doom.

Really great imagery too!

Annie McElfresh said...

How awesome Harmony is!! I love the scene you created, because I can see verything happening. :)

Becca said...

I totally felt like HIM. Wow. This was cute and tense and I loved it. <33

Jill Wheeler said...

Wow, I'm seeing so many great boy voices today! I don't know how you do it!

Karla Calalang said...

Wow, I love your prose! It's so beautiful! And guy POV for the win!