Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Tease!

Sooo, band geeks is pretty much done. It just needs to go out to my beta. If you'd like to beta, I'd do it in return! Just comment or email me at epage126[at]gmail[dot]com. Thanks guys!

8 comments:

Debra Driza said...

I love pranks..even though it sounds like this one didn't turn out so well, lol! There seems to be a lot going on with the relationship dynamics here that I'm intrigued to figure out!

Alyce Haast said...

I agree with Deb, the relationship seem so intense and complicated and i want to know what they actually are... and Cocoa Puffs for the win :D

Bri said...

Again, I love the dynamics and relationships between this characters! So complicated and thus, so realistic.

Angie said...

Haha - love the prank. Love it even more that it didn't turn out quite as expected. Thanks for sharing. :)

Ellen said...

Aww, that sucks :/ but very creative prank, yet again, even though it didn't end well :)

Angelica R. Jackson said...

You have to admire a carefully orchestrated prank that goes as planned, but sometimes the failures are funnier in different ways than the expected outcome. good job with this section.

Bee said...

This is so lovely and warm and bittersweet-ish. Love the way you write!

Also, I'd love to beta, but I can only do that after the 12th of July 'cos I have exams before that. If that's okay with you..

Glen Akin said...

awww. Never read a gay lovers' tiff. This is really nice. Loved it.