Monday, June 7, 2010

teaser

Without my school schedule I almost always forget that it's Tuesday. I'm putting the finishing touches on band geeks, then sending it out to my beta (seriously, it will be in your inbox tomorrow Karlie, promise) so this will probably be the last tease because I'm about to start putting an SNI on paper. As always, if you want to beta, feel free to comment or email me at epage126[@]gmail[.]com. Thanks guys! You're awesome.

8 comments:

LM Preston said...

That was inviting. Started to read and before I knew it I was looking for more. I love the description, feeling and dialogue.

Karla Calalang said...

Descriptions were amazing, and the dialogue too. I love your writing!

Ellen said...

Agreed, awesome descriptions! I love how he talks about the way she feels when he's carrying her piggyback, and how you make that fairly normal action seem so sensual :)

Phoebe said...

Oh my my, this is an incredibly sexy teaser. Nice work!

Annie McElfresh said...

Smexy Scene my Supernatural Sister!! :D I love the descriptions, it all felt real!

Glen Akin said...

This is wonderful. But Ive got a question: are they dating? Sounds like the bloke likes her, and the way she keeps touching and holding him, sounds like she likes him too. So why are they still running around circles? lol loved this

RAD - Dot Painter said...

I'm with Glen. Can you put a little background on the couple to fill in some blanks before the tease? Very visual in your descriptions, nice job!

Bri said...

Totally feel the sparks between those two; it's awesome! And, let me echo everyone else and say that your descriptions are fantastic. I'll miss teasers from this!