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- LizPage
- I'm a young adult writer with a penchant for reading, writing and drinking insane amounts of coffee. I'm an insomniac with a habit of late night blogging/reading/marathoning Criminal Minds. I'd love to hear from you so don't hesitate to drop a line!
13 comments:
Beautiful writing, as always :)
Voice + writing = simply gorgeous :D
Your dialogue is perfect. And the voice is priceless. First time reading one of your teasers -- following you now!
Gosh, I'm such a romantic, so this made my little heart smile lots and lots :) What a gorgeous scene. I could feel it like I was there. I really loved this.
Oh, and "pretty twist of pink lips" is a beautiful use of language.
nice snip! moreeee please....im waitingggg :)
I'm not much of romantic, and I do admit that I feel a little emotion-overload reading this lol but yeah, I can see why this is going to be a big hit when it gets published, and I am interested in reading more! =D
This flowed so well. It was like reading poetry almost. Great work, and your MC really pulls me in.
What a fluid piece of writing. It was so easy to just go happily along with them :]
I loved the details about the freckles and the nail polish. They make this character come alive. This line is amazing: We would peel off our summer skin and be different people.
*waves I heart Liz writing banner* I loved this! Such poetry and such nice little details that made me smile. Like this line: It stung, because I was probably more sunburned than I was hoping for, but I wanted her to do it again
"We would peel off our summer skin and be different people." <-- such a great line! Beautiful prose in this teaser :)
I've never read your writing before, and I love it!
Great voice and flow and descriptions!
Also makes me want to go lie in tall grass somewhere :P
When they were talking about the world going on and just staying in that same spot, I felt like I was right there with them. :)
Now I want to go lay on some green grass and stare at the sky. loool XD
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