Perfect mix of dialogue, action and interiority. Loved this line: "Blue and white lights burst through the darkness at the top of the road."Awesome tease :D
Descriptions are beautiful and your writing is so filled with raw emotions.
I just love the little memory of him and cj in their younger years...well, you know i just love cj! lol
LOVE this line:"It's old and abandoned, falling down like cards..."But I love all of your descriptions. I get sucked into your story every. single. time.<3
I loved the relationship between the siblings. It was heartfelt, yet sad.
Love the descriptions. I've said it loads of times, but I'll say it again: I love your writing style. Completely hooked.
Your descriptions are great. The conversation with the cop makes me really curious. Good stuff!
The relationship between the brothers is hilarious, esp the puke talk. Made me laugh and felt real and natural. Great snip my Supernatural loving Sister! LOL :D
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