Monday, March 15, 2010

Teaser Tuesday!

Tease from my WIP that is still without a title! I should probably do something about that soon.
snip!

8 comments:

inkspatters said...

Perfect mix of dialogue, action and interiority.

Loved this line: "Blue and white lights burst through the darkness at the top of the road."

Awesome tease :D

Bee said...

Descriptions are beautiful and your writing is so filled with raw emotions.

Karla Nellenbach said...

I just love the little memory of him and cj in their younger years...well, you know i just love cj! lol

Becca said...

LOVE this line:

"It's old and abandoned, falling down like cards..."

But I love all of your descriptions. I get sucked into your story every. single. time.

<3

J.S. Wood said...

I loved the relationship between the siblings. It was heartfelt, yet sad.

Marilyn Almodovar said...

Love the descriptions. I've said it loads of times, but I'll say it again: I love your writing style. Completely hooked.

Amanda said...

Your descriptions are great. The conversation with the cop makes me really curious. Good stuff!

Annie McElfresh said...

The relationship between the brothers is hilarious, esp the puke talk. Made me laugh and felt real and natural. Great snip my Supernatural loving Sister! LOL :D