Wow, some amazing imagery in here! Plus--sad! Love the drowning in vanilla and sugar line, and this one: I swear,if I can squeeze my eyes tight enough, hold my breath long enough, focus hard enough, I’ll be back there on the beach.Really great snip! :)
Love the emotions on this! The descriptions of his longing for Anna are so real and sad. Obviously CJ comes in to change the tone of the excerpt. I'm hooked!
I love the regret. The running over the list of what went wrong. I can feel the emotion.
Aw!! Sniff, sniff...you know I love this part, especially where he's thinking of Anna and letting himself believe she's right there with him. So heart-breaking.
Aw :( Milo tugs at my old heart strings. But CJ makes me laugh! Great snip.
I can almost FEEl the emotions your MC is feeling. I absolutely loved the image you paint in my mind through your imagery.FAB teaser <3
I feel so bad for Milo. But CJ does bring some smile on my face, which is good. I didn't want to drown in all the sorrow. I wonder what happened to Anna
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