Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!

In the middle of the insanity that is my family gathering for the holidays, here's a short teaser from 365!
Angela has woken Lindsay up in the middle of the night while she and Riley are fighting.

*snip*

12 comments:

Amna said...

"I’ll be leaving an empty space"--
Awww, that is so sad :(

I love the inner dialogue in this scene, and how she admits to be prideful.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

I agree, the inner dialog is really nice. But also really nice character descriptions. I'm interested in the relationships.

Angie said...

You've got me curious too - time isn't on our side, I'll be leaving an empty space. Something bad is going to happen, isn't?

Bee said...

"Or maybe we’re the ghosts, maybe we’re all already gone" --there's something so thought-provoking about this line!
With all your teasers, I have to admit, I'm falling in love with Lindsay :)

Jill Wheeler said...

Love the yellow line like a tightrope. Curious about the baby taking her place... I would read on.

choco (In Which a Girl Reads) said...

Love the inner dialogue, and your MC's voice!

Great teaser :D

J.S. Wood said...

I really want her to hold his hand and I know nothing that is going on. I like your MC's thoughts.

inkspatters said...

You have great interior dialogue and flow in everything I've read by you, Liz. Amazing characters, too :)

Chanelley said...

Your writing is beautiful. I loved this.

Deniz Kuypers said...

I mean it when I say this is truly amazing. I always look forward to reading your Tuesday snippets, probably because I feel very akin to your writing style. Anyway, keep it up! If you haven't found an agent for this yet, it shouldn't be too hard to do so.

V said...

Gahhh your writing is so beautiful. I especially loved this line: "Someone once told me that there were more people on earth now than ever before but I was only half listening and I might be remembering it wrong." So great.

Karla Calalang said...

Your writing is so beautiful <3