I was completely sucked in. You have a way with details. When you described the street lights, I could see them so clearly. Nice teaser!
I really loved the street lights description!And I think you nailed it with the Halloween parties and how every teen has expectations of how to dress up.
Not to be redundant, but I loved the description of the streetlights. And I liked the feeling I got from the narrator when she talked about her brother--it was so conflicted and honest.
Haha I'm jumping on the bandwagon about the streetlights. But in general, your descriptions are AMAZING. I love what she says about her brother.
Sexy kitty or sexy nurse - to true! This is great!!
Her brother reminds me of my own - especially the burping thing. Great image there. I also liked the line about the streetlights. Great tease!
I love the discription of her dad: Big ands and the smell of motor oil.The discriptions are lovely!PS-I vote for the sexy nurse outfit! LOL
Your descriptions are so great! There's a lot of humour here which is awesome! Geat job.
You have a wonderful way of describing each detail. Great teaser!
This is awesome! You're great with details, and I love your MC. She seems so real and the descriptions were very witty :)
You have such a way with descriptions, I could see everything. And your MC's voice is strong, but subtle. Great job! :)
This was so fluid, just like how I think sometimes when I'm kind of in a haze and contemplative..It was really, really well done :]
Ah, this makes me reminisce for Halloween parties. Nicely done. Good atmosphere and feel.
Awesome as always! Love the margarita, painting toe nails line. This is the one where she's got cancer, right? So the fact she's going as a dead nurse is even more symbolic...hope I've got the right blog! It's a long day. If it is the cancer one, yes, I still wanna beta read!I love the family dynamic too
I liked how she was going to take the sexy costume and make it different. Great descriptions!
I know I'm late but I'm so glad you didn't snip your teaser. I so love Lindsay's voice, especailly where she talks about Sam ~awesome!Can't wait for 365 to come out :)
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